Sunday Scribblings - Kiss

your lips are a

night moon

 

and mine, the sea.

gravity

pulls me

routinely toward you

 

creating

powerful undercurrents

 

sands shift

landscapes alter

 

then

calm

smooth as sea glass

 

until the next

kiss

after wave-crashing

kiss

for Sunday Scribblings

Comments

[Sandy]

I like the way you think! This is wonderful.

[Soulless]

Loved how you'd set up the analogy in this (subtly exhilarating) way. I could imagine the heady aftermath. Cheers. ^_^

[Tammy]

perfect describtion of a passionate kiss! BRAVO!

[jerri]

Wow. The pull between the moon and the tides is the essence of the draw of kisses. This is my first visit, but I'll be back for much more.

Thank you.

[Frances]

What inages - I love the part about gravitation.
May you have many wave crashing kisses.
Take care,
Frances