One Deep Breath - Breath

at first breath, protest
at final breath, rest
while friends protest

for other more uplifting haiku on Breath/ Breathing see One Deep Breath

Comments

[Paris Parfait]

Excellent poem!

[Megan]

thanks for writing about 14-hr days & stress. feels silly to admit it, but when I'm in the midst of that specific type of hell, it feels like I'm the only one in the entire world working like a dog. What a goofy phrase anyway...very few dogs actually work. Take a breath as soon as you can.

[Star]

All of life in three simple lines.

[jem]

Wow. A good one. You say it all really. Simple but profound.

[Crafty Green Poet]

Excellent!