at first breath, protestat final breath, restwhile friends protest
for other more uplifting haiku on Breath/ Breathing see One Deep Breath
"still crazy after all these years"
Excellent poem!
Posted by: Paris Parfait | 22 March 2007 at 17:42
thanks for writing about 14-hr days & stress. feels silly to admit it, but when I'm in the midst of that specific type of hell, it feels like I'm the only one in the entire world working like a dog. What a goofy phrase anyway...very few dogs actually work. Take a breath as soon as you can.
Posted by: Megan | 22 March 2007 at 00:15
All of life in three simple lines.
Posted by: Star | 21 March 2007 at 17:22
Wow. A good one. You say it all really. Simple but profound.
Posted by: jem | 21 March 2007 at 09:42
Excellent!
Posted by: Crafty Green Poet | 21 March 2007 at 05:01